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The Tree

My Life bears only one suculence
Dangling tenuously; teasing my desires

                                                              My Life grows only one tree with one fruit
                                                              Giving shade from all knavery; giving way for...
                                                                                  completion

My Life knows only one bird in one nest
Placed perfectly atop one branch
Singing sweetly and seductively a sprightly love song

                                                              My Life grows only one tree with one fruit
                                                              Only one sublime treat that tastes like freedom
                                                                            Tastes like truelove

And in my Life there is one girl beneath one tree
Shaded from the scorching heat of lies and emptiness
Protected from the imperfections beyond one sacred tree
                    This tree
                      My tree

                                                            My Life grows only one tree with one fruit
                                                            Hung high above one weary girl with one destiny to
                                                                                  Fall

My Life knows only one girl
And this dainty doll is me
Forever awaiting the tantalizing taste
That is your love

A contest entry

He holds me by a string.....

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  • A falling star
    March 5, 2008

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    It was good. Different from all the other entries in my contest.
    Thanks for entering!
    -Sonya