They run in sync together
Trying to find the way
To a better existence
Nothing left to say
They find comfort in each other
All have seen the dark
the hatred and the loneliness
It travels in their heart
Not knowing where to go
They wander aimlessly
Until they reach the destination
Where they were meant to be
One by one they leap
Until no one is left
The pattern of a hopeless world
Goes falling to its death.
Author notes
I chose option #1 Mass Suicide
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thank you for penning this wonderfull poem it makes
my pic look good...
there is depth in the cult side of this
amazing poem
thank you for entering the contest...
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thank you for penning this wonderfull poem it makes
my pic look good...
there is depth in the cult side of this
amazing poem
thank you for entering the contest...
--kat -
This is very good and it's so sad how accurate you really are concerning these poor lost souls. Cult mentality is just craziness... Best of luck!
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Great
Great take on the prompt--well writtenand versed!!
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