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I've Been There

I watch you fall.
I try to help,
but you bat
my out-streched arms
away...
You try to get up
all on your own,
but your world
crushes you
to the ground.
I'm there
by your side,
but you push
me away.
New scars
on your arms.
Old ones on mine.
I've been there.
Abused,
but you
hold your tounge,
and you wishper
into the night
'I'm strong;
I can get through this.'
I watch from afar
as you take
your own life.
One more new scar,
and it's all over.
One more scream
for a last breath.
I've been there...

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    February 20, 2008
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    very good poem