Blur my features
Scraped harsh to those acid words spoken
Fury burns in anger's rage
Ardour passion flamed engulfed
Blistered scorch bitter memories
Abrasion scarred a heart
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Show me .. Don't tell me
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A contest entry
- Show Me, Don't Tell Me... by MathiasThom.
575 points, ended February 20, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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heartwrenching and vivd imagery. another write that is well worthy of gold.
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very good
"Ardour passion flamed engulfed
Blistered scorch bitter memories" those were my favorite lines. You managed to say so much in such few words good write.
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love it.
and that pic...
The whole thing is put together so well. ya know.
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Excellent
An excellent take on the prompt an a well deserved Gold!
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This was good... Using words like abrasion,scarred,scraped described the bitterness of being emotionally dissolved, ripped open,quite bitter...
All of that conveyed in only 6 lines...
Nice!
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Thank you
I am so pleased
The prompt was amazing I do love this style of photography
Julie
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Fury
I do hope in a good way my very talented poet friend. The heart knows I think
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Awesome......great write hun....I think it fits the picture well........good luck in the contest....
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