Excuse me for this
I just want a kiss
Just one moment
To have something so pure
Between you and I
Mind,
Soul,
And Body
Nothing else
Just you and me
And no one else to see
Its magic
You're working
With these tender lips
So no feelings
Can escape this beautiful embrace
Between these secretive souls
No lies in here
Its with no fear
Just you and I
Just you and I
No one else for me
Just you, baby
I wish I'll never
Let you go
For this moment
Is like no other
A Phenomenon
Between you and I
And nothings real
Till you let go completley
A fairy tale
Unlike any other
I have read
Between the pages of a book
There's no one else but you
You've filled my soul
With your sweet touch
And nothings there but you
You feed the heart
But mines still craving
Your fingers
touching my face
My lips are burning
With frustration
When yours aren't there
To ease the pain
within
So
Excuse me for this
I just want a kiss
Just one moment
To have something so pure
Between you and I
Mind,
Soul,
And Body
Nothing else
Just you and me
And no one else to see
Author notes
I hope you like it
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Comments
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this is a powerful way of writing it is good i like it you have nice flow keep going
i like the way it repeats
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I really like it. I can't put my finger on the word I want so I'll say this, it's superb.
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this is really good, reminds me of one of my girfriends...oh well, anyway, LOVED it, GREAT job!
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I like it! a lot. its beautiful Eden ( i don't know what else to call you) simply AH- mazing.
Kat 
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Very sweet. I like the style of it, the excuse me for this, I just want a kiss, and the repetition you use, particularly at the end. I think it's a really beautiful poem, about something as simple yet powerful as a kiss
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this is sweet and nice and gentle.it would be a nice song.but it didint really move me in any way.its not bad at all but i like stuff thats a little deeper.somthing i havent seen before and ive seen this before.
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I really like this poem it's a very tender sweet poem
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SWEET! I missed so many good poems
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This was sweet and beautiful reminds me of a love song i listen too called One By Bee Gees. its really romantic and sweet and that kind of mystery love way too reminds me of my song i wrote too Mr.Gibb, Please Tell me the ways of love thats like way way in the beggining of my poems haha. But overrall this was a beautiful sweet write.
Sincerely much love,
Lonelywolf Tasagka
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