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Tarcus.



Terrible tantrums, turbulently trawling
Awesome albatross, actively alarming
Relatives, relaxing, repeatedly rectorial
Collective concubines, confidentially colluding
Using unseen underbellys, ubiquitously
Sensing success, seeking solace.









All of these things and more can be made of my name







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my thanks to shana who points out that it is the weekend of the oscars.

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  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008
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    i like this

    its a neat take on the option

    great job

    thank you for entering

    --kat


  • Rubix
    February 22, 2008
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    hahah

    i used to get bored at work and send out massive texts same style, so i feel the love~~!!
    although it would have been impressive if you tried to keep the rhyming up.... maybe not impressive, but something!!! I dunno... SMOOOOOTH!


  • eleno
    February 22, 2008
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    thats sounds pretty random. wow... here is the applause though. -elena

  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 22, 2008
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    ah the OSCARS - did MARTY BRANDO refuse again? is SALLY FIELD still speaking-of-nothing? is AL'fat-f^ck'GORE still eating whole countries/continents? yippee more boring/desultory TV --- now for the poem this was creative/different good title great 1st + last lines thanks for sharing regards zaj


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    Cute. I'll give you one round of applause for sheer audacity. Good luck in the contest.


  • natchstucco
    February 21, 2008

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    Well it's a good thing you dont have a longer handle...or is it. This is well served out with twistie fries. very off the wall indeed.

  • imahealer
    February 19, 2008

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    Kev, It's also a tongue twister to read! LOL Very cleverly penned. Loved the last line. Wonder if those Hollywood stars feel just like that????Best wishes! You certainly have creativity!
    Shana

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