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Hold On Me -- A pre write

I need you now
Come take me
Hold me down

Make love to me
Don't stop
Hold me down

Ravage me to endless limits
Consume my body
Hold me down

Bring me to the edge
Of sweet copulation
Hold me down

Tease me, please me
Touch me, taste me
Hold me down

Scold me, control me
Teach me, mold me
Hold me down

Entice me
Delight me
Ohhh hold me down

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  • Ithica silver member
    March 31, 2008

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    Oh Marcy!!! I never would have guessed you were soooo... Naughty!!!! And this poem was bad to the bone!!!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    Excelent

    I like how you tied this all together with the last line "hold me down" throughout! Excellent!!


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    Love it!!

    Stop it sweetgirl! I don't have a lover to hold me down...lol.

    Great write...flows well and is very erotic. Well done!

    Now I'm off to find myself a lover....


  • jcat gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    ALRIGHT!!!!! I am coming over to get your girls so that you may take care of business when your man gets home!!!! You are on the erotic train and its out of control girl!!!! You are smokin!!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!