Love waited forever
For a Mr. Right
She thought never
Would he appear tonight?
Love waited
Almost too late
Waiting for eternity
But it was fate
That answered
Love's call
And then came
Destiny in the fall
After a year passed
And Love began to grow
And then there was
Love's One Rose
Author notes
4. Love's One Rose
Had a little fun with this one
In a list
:)
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My God! this is soo beautiful! it took my breath away. so optimistic! Loved It!
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THIS IS SO SWEET!!!
I believe all of us want to wait for that special one who will bring to us the very things we desire and need.
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I believe it too Thank you!
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really touching and heartfelt.. i loved it
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Thank you for reading
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i can't tell you how touching this was... waiting until love came that was meant to be... sigh...
and i agree with ryan too, who is very perceptive as to how you set this up.
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Thank you I do believe that there is one who completes us. And waiting and going through the trials only makes us realize it (hopefully before) and not in Hind sight who we have in our life.
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this was filled with different feelings, i thought of nine months after love`s growing, especially in the fall. very nicely done.
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Thank you my dear friend
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I agree with Ryan that the formatting and picture completed the image of a rose and its stem. This poem was a much more lyrical way of saying, "You have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince." My only suggestion would be to limit the use of the word "then". You are showing a progression of time, but it becomes very repetitive in such a short poem. I am glad you have been blessed by love. Peace, Liz
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Thanks Liz, I took your suggestion and changed one to After instead of Then
I think it helps the piece along. Thanks again!
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Stunning and beautiful. The form was so well used, as the skinny lines seem to grow up be the stem. Your rhymes came out wonderful. Unlike other love poems; you actually mentioned destiny! Not just love, love I love love, stuff. You know? Beautiful piece, and I love the picture also. Well done!!
Ryan
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Thank you very much for such a sweet comment. And Rhyme is my favorite type to write. Other forms are a bit difficult for me but I do try thank you for reading and blessings to you.
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Somebody finally used Love's One Rose. I'm so glad you had fun writing this one. Beautiful piece of art. I love the picture, too.
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Thank you, I really had a blast writing it! Thanks for reading!
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Lissa, This is a fantastic use of the title and I enjoyed reading this as much as you had fun with writing this one. It's amazing how love makes us feel and the beauty of a single red rose reflecting it. I love the picture with the little angels asleep upon the rose. It went with it perfectly. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us once again. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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Thank ya! I love the fact that it basically is naming a woman Love, and her children Destiny and Rose. I thought it was just the cutest how it formed, I actually didn't intend for it to fall out the way it did, but once I started the finished was so cute and sweet I couldn't bear to change it! Thank you my friend!
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beautiful
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Thank you so much for reading and responding It is greatly appreciated
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