Beneath the bough of the willow tree,
I sit in wonder of all that I see.
God's and Mother Nature's beauty meshed,
a shady bower to feel refreshed.
Amid the field willow gently sways,
dance with the daisies on summer days.
Rhythmic movements with zephyr adrift.
splendors in meadow let mind uplift.
Touch of wonder created with love,
the willow basks in sunshinie above.
Dotting the meadow wildflowers grow,
a rush of beauty begins to flow.
As far and wide as my eyes can see,
nothing more beautiful could ever be.
God's creations and nature's making,
behold these wonders so breathtaking,
In a list
A contest entry
- Everyday Beauty....... by GodsTrueSoldier.
550 points, ended March 4, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow You Blow Me Away !
Sandy,wow you are such a great writer. Keep up the great work.
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Thank you Peter. I always enjoy your comments. You take care, Sandy
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=D muy bien!!!! I liked thsi alot, it was beautiul love teh description.
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Breath taking as always.
What a mind for beauty you have for us all to enjoy and see...mac More cocoa and grilled cheese sunshine lady .--got show want to share if you are low??????
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Wonderful Comment
Well you have a way of bringing smiles to a cloudy day. Thank you. Well I think cocoa and grilled cheese sounds like a winning recipe for happiness.
. Bring them on. Sunshine is hungry now. A cup for you and a cup for me. 
Got marshmellow?
Thank you Mac, what a dear friend. Bless you. Sandy
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this is beautiful! very well written. paints pictures in my mind with the vivid imagery used. i love this! thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always
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Thank you sis, I always appreciate you stopping by. I have you in my thoughts and prayers. Bless you. Sandy
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Breathtaking....
The painting of a picture in the mind by the use of words is a rare talent. Your words took me away and put me under that willow tree. I felt the sun, the breeze and smelled the wonderful scent. Transported, if but for a little while, and one with "these wonders so breathtaking" Excellent write. Good rythm that seem to match the sceen being painted with the words. I just loved this poem.....
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Hello Lew.
It means alot to me when you say you love my poem. There is so much of me in amongst the words. It is always an honor and pleasure when stop by and read. . I have come to value your opinion and now look forward to them. Have a blessed evening. Take care, Sandy
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Nicely done, the aa,bb quatrains are nice, the rhyme is lovely. The description bring the reader into the narrators world. Breezes flowing, trees sway, love in the air, creations that take breath away.
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You have brought a smile with this lovely comment. You take care my friend. Bless you. Sandy
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SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!
My favorite tree is a weeping willow We planted two in our back yard way back a long time ago and since they grow quickly I would sit under them on warm days and just lounge and dream during a summer day.
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Thank you so much Kevin. Always nice to hear from you. I love the weeping willow tree too. It looks so lovely swaying in the breeze. You take care dear friend. Sandy
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Breath taking is this piece of poetry that I just read. Very nice. I enjoyed it very much. I hope it does well in the contest.
Kelli
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Thank you for this lovely comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy.
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