Took from me what no one else could
The first and so far the last
Stole my world and spun me in circles
Introduced me to a life I never knew existed
Got me to do things I'd never think twice about
Pulled me away from what I thought was real life
And showed me the way to my future
Took me in and showed me love
Gave me a life I depended on
Gave me something I forced myself to rely on
Then...
Took it all away with just a second glance
The thought that never seemed to cross my mind
Stole my heart and now unable to give it back
Introduced me to a whole new world of pain and hurt
Got me crying still after three months of parting
Pulled me into a depression so thick
And couldn't even give me the satisfaction of simple closure
Took all happiness, drained it from my life
Gave me something to hold on to, something to cry about
Gave me something I needed to let go of
Some call me obsessive
Some call me stupid
Only in my mind, I realize it's not my fault
I find it almost impossible to let go of what I love so much
You make it hard for me to wash it all away
Because you never said goodbye
And I long so much just to hear your voice
For only a second
Even for just goodbye
Tears split my dry lips in two
To this day I can't let go
And I hate every minute of having to hold on
Let me let go...
I still love you
But I want to let it go.
Let me...
Free me...
Yank that safety net again.
Drop me...
Author notes
this won't be exactly what you're looking for, but i'm sure it'll be close...
A contest entry
- He Hurt Me, I Love Him by Blooming Poet.
315 points, ended February 20, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold-tastic [prewrite contest!] by Tangled Angle.
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Comments
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Deep and passionate. Your emotions are billowing from your penned words. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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wow...deep...beautiful.....i love it


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thanks. i hate it. lol.
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There you are wrong this is exactly what I am looking for, beuatiful entry




