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Waiting...

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He said to stay home,
He was hanging with his buddies,
I waited by the phone.
Nothing.....
He was with her....
I was mad, but forgave him.
He said to stay in the car,
He would only be a minute.
Leaving me there with a stranger.
I watched my love,
Go into a bar with her....
Knowing damn well,
I wasn't allowed.
Minutes faded to an hour,
Freezing in the cold,
They emerged with smiles.
I was expected to forgive.
He stole my innocence,
As well as my sanity.
This had gone on too long,
The scars will never heal,
The pain will never fade,
I only have baggage to bring.

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This is a personal write, I was with my bf (at the time) for on and off for 2 years, he was older then me, and could go out to the bars while I stayed home, almost every weekend waiting by the phone.


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  • What a stupid male to cheat on you and treat you like you were a child.
    Great write hun


    Stay safe
    Love you
    ~Manda


  • Clinging-to-Life
    February 26

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    Oh my...this makes me upset! I'm sorry you went through such things with this man. Thank you for doing as i asked and for entering this is a good write full of emotion.

  • Clinging-to-Life
    February 20
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    Please enter what I asked for in your author notes. I wont read this until then.

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 19

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    Aww what a sucky thing to do!!!! Glad you got rid of him hunny!!!

    I can relate to the sitting at home waiting for the call while your partner is out with the 'boys'... been there many many times!


    • Valley Girl Greeters member
      February 19
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      Thanks, it took me a long time to realize what I was being put through. I was "blinded by love"... stupid ass lol! I am sorry that you had to go through this as well.
  • I'm so sorry that happened to you... but it was a good poem none the less

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