I want that special someone
To hold me tight when tears fall
To take the pain and wash away it all
To be there for my late night call
I want that special someone
To tell me it'll be alright
To give in quick when we have a fight
To never let me out of their site
I want that special someone
To reassure me I'm not alone
To butter me up with a gradual tone
To get my attention by taking my phone
I want that special someone
To want me
To love me
To see me
For who I am
For what I hold
I want that special someone
To want me as their special someone.
Author notes
FEMALE yo. 17.
A contest entry
- Why? by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended February 21, 2008, 6 entries
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Thanks for entering my contest,
this poem
certainly
basicly says why every teenage
girl want s a special someone,
is funny
how we want someone
to come and "heal us"
when God is already there.
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I don't really have faith in God. If he's so great, then why does so much go wrong, and how come he can't heal us. All he seems to do for me, is help the pain keep carrying on, and not help me let go.
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i think everyone does, grealy put into words. Nicely done.
and good luck finding this someone.
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Thanks a bunch. And I'll need the luck, cuz I almost had it, so I thought, but I let it slip from my fingertips and lost it in the rubble.
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then maybe they weren't the one. The one will come along when you least expect it
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well one can only hope
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