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Another Scar

Once across
Only once
I swear
That was the last time
I swear
Thats what I said
But when the pain gets
To where you can't help
But to do it
The final product is
Another scar
Some more hurt
That I've done to other people
How can I stop?
Who really even cares about me?
Not the people I live with!
Not the person who gave birth to me!
Who really even cares about me?
The blade is my only true friend
The blood that comes out
The scars that are always going to be there
Those are the friends who will always be there!
I'm so sorry!
How can I explain
That I'm forever doomed to this pain?
How can I explain
That it'll never change?
I swore that I'd shop
You swore that I could always talk to you
That you'd always be there for me
But you're not here anymore!
What could I do?
I feel like I'm all by myself
The pressure that your putting on me
It doesn't help
I'm sorry
I'm so sorry
Please forgive me
I'm so sorry
Could you ever forgive me?

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  • darkalesyse
    April 8, 2008

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    It's hard to notice the love that people have for you when you can't even love yourself. Most people that cut completely hate themselves. They can't understand and when you are so confused, everythnig is a blur. Nothing seems right, you feel left alone because in a way, you are the only one around feeling this way, or atleast that you know of. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    ~Tiff


  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    February 20, 2008
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    I'm always here for you to talk to! Don't feel alone!


    • Chrissi
      February 20, 2008
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      i know but is very hard you know what i mean?


  • RAWR-itsPurplePixie
    February 19, 2008

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    this was a really poem even though it was sad that was the point to be full of emotion I really liked it!

    • Chrissi
      February 20, 2008
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      thank you! im glad that you really enjoyed reading it.!


  • maryg303
    February 19, 2008
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    thats a sad poem. But it is very well writen!!

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