Oh, my drug dealer
I need something that can heal her
You can play god
If you'd like just give me what you got
This pain is deep
So come around
I can't sleep
But throwing away now and then
Be like a god
Sell me everything you got
We need to cleanse our selves
I'm a sun worshiper
So come around at night drug dealer
I sleep all day
Are you on your way
I need to fix her
With everything to fix a broken heart
I need extra strength
Not just your marijuana
This time I need to releive pain
I need an opiet that can be used by any abuser
Your my drug dealer
I need something that can heal her
You can play god
If you'd like just give me what you got
I need extra strength
Not just your marijuana
This time I need to releive pain
I need an opiet that can be used by any abuser
We need your remedy
To play thousands of melodies
So come around to us
Your a heart's curer
Your my drug dealer
I need something that can heal her
You can play god
If you'd like just give me what you got
I need extra strength
Not just your marijuana
This time I need to releive pain
I need an opiet that can be used by any abuser
Author notes
Just an acoustic song based after Drug Dealer's beat by anthony green.
A contest entry
- Just Like A Pill by CarnalNineTailedFox.
375 points, ended March 12, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like this. It's nice that you had a rhythm in mind while writing it. You can definately tell it's supposed to be a song. I also like how it's about healing someone with drugs which actually do the opposite. Nice.


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Wow
An awesome write. You have a lot of talent so don't every stop.
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this was just original! i like the drug dealer thing! i would have never thought of that! great job! thank you for entering
and best of luck to you!
NineTailedFox -
Damn!!!
This was really good. You have a lot of talent Joe. Don’t ever think that you don’t have talent. Reading your writes, they always leave me thinking. Thinking a lot of things. But anyways, I really liked this. This one left me speechless. I love reading your stuff!!
Really Good!!!!






