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My Drug Dealer

Oh, my drug dealer
I need something that can heal her
You can play god
If you'd like just give me what you got

This pain is deep
So come around
I can't sleep
But throwing away now and then

Be like a god
Sell me everything you got
We need to cleanse our selves
I'm a sun worshiper
So come around at night drug dealer

I sleep all day
Are you on your way
I need to fix her
With everything to fix a broken heart

I need extra strength
Not just your marijuana
This time I need to releive pain
I need an opiet that can be used by any abuser

Your my drug dealer
I need something that can heal her
You can play god
If you'd like just give me what you got
I need extra strength
Not just your marijuana
This time I need to releive pain
I need an opiet that can be used by any abuser

We need your remedy
To play thousands of melodies
So come around to us
Your a heart's curer

Your my drug dealer
I need something that can heal her
You can play god
If you'd like just give me what you got
I need extra strength
Not just your marijuana
This time I need to releive pain
I need an opiet that can be used by any abuser

Author notes

Just an acoustic song based after Drug Dealer's beat by anthony green.

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  • EmoTaco
    May 3

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    I really like this. It's nice that you had a rhythm in mind while writing it. You can definately tell it's supposed to be a song. I also like how it's about healing someone with drugs which actually do the opposite. Nice.

  • Wow

    An awesome write. You have a lot of talent so don't every stop.

  • this was just original! i like the drug dealer thing! i would have never thought of that! great job! thank you for entering
    and best of luck to you!
    NineTailedFox

  • Autumn-Marie
    February 20

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    Damn!!!

    This was really good. You have a lot of talent Joe. Don’t ever think that you don’t have talent. Reading your writes, they always leave me thinking. Thinking a lot of things. But anyways, I really liked this. This one left me speechless. I love reading your stuff!!

    Really Good!!!!