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Soul Mate

Scarlet red sunset
glows upon your face
Such radiant beauty
magnificent grace
Deep in richness
flash of your eye
It sparks my mind
makes me want to cry
Soul mate of my life
each moment savored
The tranquility of heart
Is so lovingly flavored
The mingling of light
as we join into one
Is so much richer
than the setting sun



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  • Xx Luna xX
    February 21, 2008
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    Thank you for entering

    Wow the form and rhyme of this piece is awesome. Truly deep and written from the heart.


  • poetryality silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    This is soothing. I love the outline of what might be seen as a little red dress. Yes...I feel your eyes adorning here elegance, her beauty..."grace".

    Your poem is easily; "The tranquility of heart"

    Lovely work! ~Sigh The best to you in the Comp.



    Much Love ♥

    Renee