Eyes roll back into my skull
Revealing bloodshot whites
As slow and sure, I scull
Jittering in sadistic delight
Cold steel twisted twine
Slides seductively against
The white marrow of my spine
Smiling gleefully as you wince
Scowling moans
Summoning pheromones
As upside down
From meat hook and wires
Dribbling blood saturates the ground
Whilst I paint with my brush of desires
Whisking through
This masochist masterpiece
I slice off a snack from you
As the flood of fluids doesn’t cease
You’re packed with vitamins
And amino acids
An artist’s delight to gorge in
On breaks when I am flaccid
You convulse and complain
As razors apathetically dissect
And muscles rigidly knot
Soon the air will dry the veins
Quiet! You’re disrupting the plot
Of the Master Architect
Finally, I can’t take the grind
The primitive chatter
In a passionate flash of gore
The throat is torn from the rind
Streaming red cascades and splatters
Perfect! That’s what I was looking for
With the last twirl and dab
I blow you a shy kiss
Oh, what fun we’ve had!
What’s next you can’t miss
Gingerly I gather and pack
You’ve been wonderful my muse
A visual adrenaline laced attack
But come, there’s more of you to use
As the blood begins to dry and condense
We ascend through the ceiling
Entwined in the heartless chains
Looking back, overcome by feeling
Law enforcement efforts will be in vain
For the painting is the only evidence
Author notes
by andywontdie. enjoy.
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Comments
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Wowzer, you have penned a deep dark master piece. I love the angle you used, very creative wording. Imagery is awesome. Very well written. Good luck
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SPEECHLESS!
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WOW!
You're word choice was fuckin PERFECt!
HOLY HELL.....
HOW....how did you learn to write like this?
Shit, you're fuckin TALENTED! KUDOS ON THIS PIECE!
I love everything about it:
the fear
the torture
the method of death....
EVERYTHING! This is amazing and very suspenseful
kudos again and thanks for entering
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thank you so much. i was hoping you'd like
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