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Dropped Low

Oh dear God
How could I have dropped this low?
To this place where I've lost sight of you
Your the one I need to focus on
But I've lost sight of you

Oh dear God
Please provide me me with a guardian angel
Please provide me with a way
For me to see your loving grace

Oh dear God
I'm so sorry
Please forgive me
And show me how
I can be with you and your family

Oh dear God
How could I have dropped this low?

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 19, 2008

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    I think you did a good job with this. I think you need to reread it for typo's. Other than that, I enjoyed the read.
    Kelli