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The reality that they can't see

The reality that they can't see,
I try so hard
but fail the test
To open up to him
and let him love me
but others can't see that
I am living in a dream
he trys so hard to love me
but I just push him away
like hes not there
people dont see the reality of what i am doing to his heart
now hes dead cause i killed him
I saw blood driping when he stabbed himself
I pull up his shirt and it said
YOU KILLED ME

can someone help me

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  • simplefarmgirl
    February 19, 2008

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    Wow. So much pain and emotion packed in so few words. That shows that you are truly a great poet.

    Care to tell me the story behind this? I was really hoping for an author note w/ an explanation or something...


  • Lost Emo
    February 19, 2008
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    wow. these r hard hitting words. u shouldn't feel like this. how do u know it was u that did this