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Sergeant Blaylock

Get up son,
I’ll carry your pack,
Lean on me,
I’ll get you back.

I know you’re tired,
And wounded too.
Don’t worry son,
I’ll carry you.

Crouse, take point,
Now don’t fail me.
Try to find us,
A good LZ.

You other men,
Let’s move ahead,
Don’t bunch up,
Mind what I said.

No smoking, Brown,
Keep your trap shut,
You screw up,
I’ll kick your butt.

Good work Crouse,
I’ll call for evac,
Move out men,
I’ve got your back.

I hear choppers,
They’ll make a pass,
Defensive positions,
In the grass.

There he is,
Cobra red
Put out some smoke
Hes overhead.

There’s the blue,
To evac our stick,
Be alert men,
Protect the slick.

Stay awake,
He’s coming down.
Hustle when he,
Touches down.

Lay down cover fire,
Into the trees,
Try to knock out,
any RPGs.

We all fall back,
My face like chalk,
Fear has kicked in,
I start to talk.

We reach the slick,
It’s hard to hear,
Blaylock boosts us,
From the rear.

We dusted off,
We’re in the air,
Small arms fire coming,
From some where.

The gunner’s bursts,
Are raining down,
To hit those shooting,
From the gound.

There’s Blaylock,
Sitting on his pot,
Protecting his butt,
From a lucky shot.

The men in the stick,
I’m sure all knew,
If you fell behind,
He’d come back for you.

This Iron Man,
Of first cavalry,
Did his duty,
Religiously,

I’m afraid,
I never knew him well,
But would follow him,
Through the gates of hell

We might be hot,
And terrified,
But he’d lead us through,
And out the other side.

Author notes

To the men whose names are on the wall and to the ones that are not, God bless them all.
stick-fire team
slick-chopper
Smoke-usually a M-18 cannister grenade

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Comments


  • Pollycheck silver member
    April 18

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    Thank you for entering my military contest. This made me feel almost like I was back there again. Great write.

  • Rheea gold member
    February 20
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    the suicides are not there
    it makes the wall incomplete.
    The deaths from cancer and agent
    orange are not there
    it makes it incomplete
    the babies from birth
    defects are not there
    it makes it incomplete
    The deaths from agent ogange diabetes
    are not there
    it makes it incomplete.



    This is absolutely beautiful to me
    God Bless you Del.


  • PurplePixie
    February 19
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    good good I like it