Are you listening?
Or are you looking, judging?
I'm speaking.
Can you hear me through your own thoughts?
Don't focus on the eyeliner tracking down my face,
on the tears in my jeans,
the black in my hair.
Don't think, just listen.
I might say something that will save you,
but you won't hear it. You refuse.
Is my message coming through?
Don't nod unless you mean it.
Take me seriously, don't be distracted.
Close your eyes if you have to.
LISTEN!
If you can't hear this -
Close your eyes.
It might open your mind.
Author notes
frustration
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Hey, its sound advice. We should not judge people on their appearances. I know I've done that before and have also been wrong about it. Hopefully people learn to judge people on how they treat one another.
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I love it. I like how you express that even though you may not look or act like people want you to you still have feelings and want to express yourself.
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wow... LOVED IT... close your eyes. and it just might open you mind... GREAT line.. but I shouldn't have to tell you that.
Hmmm..... I need to call you girl.... AH!!!! I miss you (cry ....) lol
LOVE YOU!!!!
Donna -
OMG... So awesome! Your writing never ceases to amaze me, lover. You write so fantastically. I will listen anytime you need me to.
I love you.
-Caitie
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wow this was amazing as well,
just frm the start you could tell you were Serious
and frustrated about it, thats clear as day
great work doll, this was great keep it up love lots
endless-lover
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I felt the frustration before I got to your author notes. You did a great job of making it clear. I enjoyed reading your words. Great job.
Kelli
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thanks for the nice comment. i'm glad you liked it!
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