A regular walk to the park
My baby’s favourite landmark
Not more than half a mile away
Where kids like to run and play
In the centre of the busy town
A place filled with giggling sound
Not only by little princes and angels
This place is liked by parents, as well,
Rows of beautiful flowers
A big wide tree in the corner
The green grass covering the ground
Swings,slides and see-saws all around.
Author notes
This is a quatrain poem having rhyming scheme of aabb.
A contest entry
- Everyday Beauty....... by GodsTrueSoldier.
550 points, ended March 4, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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=D very beautiful!!! I like it, I liek the fact it was purely based on a park, very nice and very straightforward...
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