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Distance Between Us

Our words are empty
Our hearts begin to wilt
& once something dies
It can never be revived

All I have are the memories
& an empty bed
Late nights on the phone
& occasional visits

They say absence makes the heart grow fonder
But mine is growing weaker by the hour
& you can't compensate
For the lack of mine

You're hanging on to me by shredded threads
& you think about letting go
But you don't want to give up on your reason to live
You don't want to give up on what we use to have
You don't want to give up on what we could be
You don't want to give up on what I need

The distance between us
Puts spaces between us
& disingrates the love
I only hope,
What we have is strong enough


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  • This was an amazing poem :]

  • MyAngelsGuardian
    February 22

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    Your poem sounds like its coming from experiance. Long distance relationships requite alot of commitment by both people, a will to make it work, and a good match. They are really hard and most never make it. You share that in your poem. Good luck with the contest.


  • WishMeAway--x
    February 20

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    i know how this one is.
    im in a long distance relationship and it sucks very much so.

    this is amazing.
    ♥love.
  • wow amazing poem like always sweetie
    i truely loved it best wishes to you
    in the contest love bunches...


    endless-lover

  • slaveprincess
    February 19
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    i forgot to say good luck in the contest, sorry

  • slaveprincess
    February 19

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    very nice i love ur poetry.....my bf and I are goign through this stage it gets stuff but u gotta to stay strong.... thanks for writing

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