Don't hide your face
you are the everyday beautiful
you shine like the sun
you always have fun
don't be ashamed
your the one thats filled with glammer and fame
Don't hide your face
you are the one thats going to win the race
So they laugh
So they tease
your the one with all the great deeds
Just believe in your self every day
Just shine and always try to find your way
don't worry about the outside
It is always about what's inside your heart
To just believe that your the star you are.
A contest entry
- Everyday Beauty....... by GodsTrueSoldier.
550 points, ended March 4, 2008, 21 entries
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your poetry is quite amazing little one... you're going to be a fabulous poet if you keep writing! you're poetry is much more mature than i initially thought it would be like. i wrote poems like you when i was younger, so stick with it, you will be a poetry legend in no-time! i'll check back periodically for new poems i can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve.
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nice poetry.
summer51
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A beautiful poem that's missing a friend, surely spell check should be invited here to help you with your grammer. Anyway it's still a good attempt at poetry, and as time passes, you will get better. So keep the pen moving, and the words grooving.
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A very nice...
...message Whoopie, and a good attempt at rhyme.
Just a little word of advice - use spellcheck on your computer to help you with spelling. We all need it at times.
Also, check out your grammar ; most of your "yours" should be you're!
Robin.
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Remember to Spell check -- Typing mistakes and spelling mistakes don't look good in writing
But this is wonderful! Thanks for entering... And best of luck
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thank you guy
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=D I like it alot!!!!
It sounds like somehting I would write heheh Its very nice and posative I like it alot!!!!!
Thanks so much for the entry!
You do have a few type's but nothing that can't be fixed...happens to the best of us =D -
it's good I like it
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I like the foundation of this piece. You do have a couple typo's in it. Some of your "your" should be "you're" Just remember if you want it to be your are then it is you're. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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