If you knew what you don't see,
If you knew what you have caused,
If you knew what I can't say
Would things change?
Would you still be mad after 5 months
If you knew how sorry I am?
If you knew that I still cry over you?
Would you still want nothing to do with me
If you you knew that I still love you?
That I've forgiven you for what you did to me?
Would yo forgive me for my small offence
Like I've forgiven you for that pain you made in me?
Would you feel sorry for what you've done?
Would you count the score as even
If you saw all the blood I spill because of you?
If you saw the scars,
If you saw the tears,
If you saw those nights I cried till I was dry,
Would you understand how sorry I am?
If you saw how strong I can be,
But how much I miss you,
If you knew how hard I try to hate you,
If you knew what your missing,
If you started to miss me,
Would you hesitate to tell me,
You want to be friends?
Please tell me what you think
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I agree with Elenaliz ...
it doesn't sound like a poem. I do know that situations like this don't often work out. You're better off to work through it and move on. There are a lot of fish in the ocean and someone else will come along soon enough. Just remember that life seldom gives us what we want, or at least not in the way we want it. I can't understand why anybody would mutilate themselves, which is what it sounds like you are saying here, and I'd advise against repeating anything like that. Don't sit around and mope. Get out and find somebody who will work out better.
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wow..pain this brings back deep memorys i am 2 a cutter thats saying if you ment phyiscail scars well never the less superb depiction of pain and regret and longing i can relate ful heartly *hugs*
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this sounds like you cheated on someone and your writing them a letter.it doesnt sound like apoem to me but it does have alot of pain and emotion in it
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