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Dancing Unpoetically Around Faith...

slumbering peacefully

neath sunshine wool

confident Mama

is an acrobat

Author notes

prompt: Blanket
10 words

My cat Faith loves to stretch out on the carpet and sleep in the warm sunshine...and NEVER fears that I will step on her...no matter how difficult it is to step over or around her sprawled out sunbathing...LOL! I almost broke my neck this morning...and she never even stirred...utterly confident I will do acrobatic tricks to get around her...NOW that is the definition of sleeping neath a blanket of trust...I HAVE TWO LEFT FEET...

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  • Grey Mouser
    February 20, 2008

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    am sure she has the utmost confidence in your abilities Honey Nut, or maybe she just is encouraging you to learn some new steps Wonderful feeling in this write that is so near to your magnificent heart.

    Mouser
    around the moon and across the galaxy


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    ADORABLE!!!

    I used to have my Smokey lay all sprawled out in the middle of the floor and she would not move for anyone!'s Or she would lay on the couch and you would have to sit around her and not disturb her if you did she gave you this angry look.


  • Mirthryl
    February 19, 2008

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    Delightful poem! Love the title, especially "Dancing Unpoetically!" The "Faith" nicely reiterated with "slumbering peacefully...confident Mama is an acrobat."


  • Kelli Marie
    February 19, 2008

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    This is great...I first read it a different way...and I blush. Your comments cleared that up for me. Very nicely done.
    Kelli