Soft whispers amongst the fragrance,
undulating pools of blue clearness,
water lilies float softly with cadence,
monarchs drink from their splendor.
The blushing sunset is breathtaking,
sol's radiance embraces my face,
my heart caressed with a vale of beauty,
balmy is the soft breeze in my utopia.
Moonbeams dance amid the twilight,
moving like a gentle rhythmical waltz,
intertwined with romance and starlight,
passions rise with the silence of the day.
No tempest shall dare visit our paradise,
two hearts unguarded with temptation,
there is only you and there is only me,
the moonlight serenades as we dance.
The starlit sky embellishes our solitude,
a purple haze is adrift in the moonlight,
sweet serenity heard in dawn stillness,
the morning dew kisses another sunrise.
A contest entry
- Romeo, oh Romeo! by Xx Luna xX.
300 points, ended February 21, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering
sweet serenity heard in dawn stillness,
the morning dew kisses another sunrise.
Beautiful ending.
What a wonderful write this is! Well done!!
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A lovely comment. Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading. You take care, Sandy
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Superb
A most excellent romantic write, indeed. Especially as inspired by the photo. Again, well done.
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Hello, Thank you for the lovely comment. So nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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You are quite welcome.
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Lovely image with butterfly. Refreshing description of Utopia. Moonbeams sway to dance as passion stir, in sweet serenity holding bodies together at dawn as the sun kisses the earth.Good luck on the Contest.
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Hello chiefmac. Your words are always so thoughtful and a pleasure to read. Thank you for stopping by and bringing a smile along with you. So glad you enjoyed. Take care, Sandy
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GIVES ME CHILLS
I could dance ALL night in a place like that, and I don't even know how. Your "UTOPIA" is simply ravishing. Thank you for taking me there if only for a moment in my mind.
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Thank you Capt Jed for the lovely comment. You need not know how to dance in a place like this. There is magic just standing still with the one you love.
Thank you for stopping by. I so enjoyed your comment.
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Wonderful
A beautiful sensual write Sandy
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Hello dear friend
So nice to see you read and comment on my poem. I guess I do get inspired sometimes. 
You have a wonderful day. Hugs and smiles. Sandy
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It seems you've read my mind. Sunrise is one of the most spiritual experiences of my life. Wonderfully tender flow of soft images. Best wishes in the comp, I doubt you'll need it.
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A lovely comment. TRhank you. Take care, Sandy
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no need to use SOL instead of sun last stanza was the best --- the use of 'solitude' to me obligates your removing/using SUN instead of SOL good write of this scene thanks for sharing regards zaj
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I appreciate you stopping by. Very nice comment!! You take care. Sandy
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WOW I really like the picture that you placed. YOu have a really really good write and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I know this poem would have my vote!
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Thank you for the lovely comment. You take care, Sandy
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Lovely thoughts shared in these lines - sentiments well expressed here. Liked the flow, the picture and the images one gets when reading this. Wonderful entry into this contest.
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Thank you so much Granny, this was a lovely comment. Thank you for reading. Take care, Sandy
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Sandy
I think uopu outdid yourself with this write. Words of love, Visions beautiful and all said so nicely. No filth or rubbish. Amazing. Good luck to you
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Well thank you Bob, I always appreciate your lovely comments. They are very thoughtful. So glad you enjoyed. This was a fun write for me
I don't write too many sensual oes.
. God bless you and you have a nice evening my friend. Always, Sandy
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