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Wait

I wait too long...

For him to come home.

A contest entry

So...

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    very short write you have here,
    but i guess it sid it all.
    Kinda sad, full of emotions in just a few words.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Loveandblesings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 7, 2008

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    This is short and bittersweet... I really like the take on the poem... ten words is such a small amount to make an impact, but you have done just that

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 20, 2008
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    quite engaging... x


  • oTazZo
    February 19, 2008
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    not bad

    it goes with the pic plus short and sweet


  • Kelli Marie
    February 19, 2008

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    I like the write. It can connect with the picture,but not as well as I think it should. Still I enjoyed the read.
    Kelli

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