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Cut this out of me...

The voices have returned.. without any warning..

They tell me these things...so early this morning...

Tell me that you are okay...that nothing is wrong...

then pick up your blade and make me strong...

For my soul is on fire...for the things that can not be undone...

So please pick up your blade... and get this done...

Cut this out of me.. its hurting me so....

I have no clue where it came from...but its striking a fatal blow...

But now we must go...

To follow this path we must go...

Leaving the demon behind us... and heading towards the light...

I think ill be alright...

Just make sure that you are safe tonight...

Author notes

I had a really dark moment earlier this morning...it chilled me to the very bone...

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  • RAWR-itsPurplePixie
    February 19, 2008
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    it's really good... very powerfull


  • z etoile
    February 19, 2008

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    hmmmm afraid to say what I am thinking. The voices I know them sometimes too, but its hard to admit it cause then you are deamed crazy right. Great job!