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wrap me up

Wrap me in your delight
wrap me up tight...
please

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Prompt ~ Blanket

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    Great piece

    Often the lease we say takes on such a huge thought of love and security within anothers embrace be it friend or lover the embrace stays long after the giver is gone


  • Rheea gold member
    May 29, 2008
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    loved this


  • Valley Girl silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    This is such a sweet write. I think that you described your prompt perfectly! Excellent job! and also thanks for commenting on my poem as well.