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Root of Evil

Beating me down into the ground,
deceive the reaper,
Waiting deeper,
In the earth,
to take you to your grave.


The rats dig into your flesh,
Digging deeper,
your hole grows,
as your thrusted deeper,
into your demise.


The root of evil awaits you deeper,
stretching out to grab a hold,
Pulling you ever deeper,
into your early grave.


See his rotting face,
the maggots squirming around,
glowing white eyes,
drawing you in,
digging deeper,
until your are dead.

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  • harlequin shadow
    February 19, 2008

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    i'm not completely sure what's going on with this one
    the imagery is great but, your not dead but then your bitten by rats and covered with maggots and then you die... i don't get it