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hope and love

Inspiration grows when the dust settles,
to be great is not an answer, it is you.
Wonder of life floats to the petals.
To say it true its like dew,
in the morning, glistening,
listening to the birds.
Toiling for the worthiness,
becoming your own private business,
for family overdue. Words
reign true of your heart,
that pulsates for more.
Life is about being.
Humans are nothing
without their being.
Without there being
happiness, life becomes void.
Like an empty paged tabloid.
Life is one thing, we
all must strive for.
We are born to be
and its what we need
to make time for.

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i hope this is inspirational to you guys it may not help but i put all my heart into it, and i hope you receive its love
jeremy
australia

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  • celadia
    February 22
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    You're young enough that you could be great if you wanted to be. Fantastic poem.


    • jezz
      February 23
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      hey thank you for your comment, its just a matter of time that i will be great. i have the want and im committed to achieving.
      jeremy

  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 19

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    Thanks you for this wonderful poem I am sure it will help
    Thank you for taking the time to enter this God Bless


  • ButterFilies
    February 19

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    I like this poem alot i can tell your put your heart into it because it just flows out. its wonderfull

    "Life is one thing, we
    all must strive for.
    We are born to be
    and its what we need
    to make time for."

    i really like the ending.


    • jezz
      February 19
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      thanks for the applause, it means a lot
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