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Sorry Mr Tchaikowsky; a haiku

The Sleeping Beauty...*
nice job, sir. but how can she
sleep with all those drums?


* a song, don'cha know, not the movie. you should listen to it

musical mysteries

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  • my02U
    February 22, 2008
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    thanks!

    Thank you for commenting! i see what you mean, sasha... sorry! ^-^


  • tsarina
    February 22, 2008

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    Wheee! This is SO FUNNY! I thought I was the only person who thought that about the drums!! AAahh I am dying! Rotfl. Write on, sweet homie. Only thing I would do is capitalize the title (I'm especially picky about those things) and add an ellipsis (...) after The Sleeping Beauty. Write more!!!

    ♥ sasha ♥
    cheerios.


  • riasme
    February 19, 2008

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    lol! that's true...the prologue music is outta here, especially with a live orchestra I was a page in the prologue when I was nine. haha this is too funny! three cheerios for you!

    ~lise


  • Kelli Marie
    February 19, 2008

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    This is a different kind of haiku than I am used to reading. Very intriguing for sure. I enjoyed it.
    Kelli