Roses
lying broken
on grey rocks.
Answer
my heart
and bury me.
Feelings
cannot live
with no love.
Author notes
Option 1
picture prompt
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2391/849.jpg?1203431983
"the world is not black and white, but in shades of grey"
A contest entry
- 5 options for the creative poet (20) by bananasfoster42.
525 points, ended February 20, 14 entries
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Comments
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I might have to crash bananasfoster42's contest to understand this. seem like a haiku to me, but it isn't. it is well written but very confusing. I think I would love to hear what this poem means to you from you. maybe then I can understand it better. but it is good. thanks for writing. good luck
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thanks
first of all this is a Hay (na) ku (see second-born) which is a tercet with a total of 6 words in three lines (1 word, 2, 3 or 3 words, 2, 1) and multiple Hay (na) ku can be chained . . the poem is written from a photo prompt (see pic link) and relates to the death of love not yet buried . . thanks for the compliments as well . . I wrote a Hay (na) ku for a contest with second-born as well . .
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wow. this is an amazing poem. awesome take on the picture! thanks for the entry
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I think your words and the picture prompt go very well together. You did a great job. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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