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Taffeta { HM }

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Near naked she lies upon taffeta

Gliding to her silk 

Shadowing in blue haze 

Danced amongst the sheets

Bitten lip now caressed

Heightening ecstatic pleasure

Gypsy slip thong edged lace and bow

Slides with ease 

Legs slight ajar the softened wash of skin 

Tumbling locks float 

Breast erect pressed to the cup 

Her whimpering moans music to her flow

Milks the glistening mound

Swaying hips raised 

Pumped to the fingered lust

Mastered in masturbation 

Orgasmic filled its rush

 

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Comments

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  • Leonura silver member
    October 20
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    I really love the word Gypsy. A soft and beautiful write.

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    October 7

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    This was a really sensual write.. I think you did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel

  • Maxboy gold member
    September 28

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    Wonderful

    Very sensual and erotic yet very poetic as well.

    Beautiful
    Don


  • perfectsunset
    August 18

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    WOW; that's an ocean full of sensual images unfurling one after another!
    While reading, I lost my breath.. your words make sensuality just pop out from its cage;
    almost like an on-line pop-up book! hehe

    Loved this and LOVED this part

    "Near naked she lies upon taffeta

    Gliding to her silk

    Shadowing in blue haze

    Danced amongst the sheets

    Bitten lip now caressed"

    You really used beautiful language/vocabulary in this too!

  • Swtpoetryman
    July 3

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    OHHHHHHH, i LOVE THIS ONE, HOT LEGS!

    Near naked she lies upon taffeta
    Gliding to her silk
    Shadowing in blue haze
    Danced amongst the sheets
    Bitten lip now caressed
    Heightening ecstatic pleasure
    Gypsy slip thong edged lace and bow
    Slides with ease
    Legs slight ajar the softened wash of skin
    Tumbling locks float
    Breast erect pressed to the cup
    Her whimpering moans music to her flow
    Milks the glistening mound
    Swaying hips raised
    Pumped to the fingered lust
    Mastered in masturbation
    Orgasmic filled its rush

    The piece that should have won the Gold - hands down - and we all know where - for this is a sweet and sensual piece on one of me favorite subjects - of doing what cums naturally whether man or woman yee may be! HE! HE! I think I'll take a few and do just a little bit of that now - as after all these years of pulling me pecker - I'm the master of masturbation, indeed - and I so love to watch a lovely lady who likes to let her fingers do the walking, too!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • BetterThanDrugs
    April 10
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    Wow...ok....hold on while I go take a much needed shower....good write....

  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    April 1

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    oh my my my... I think that I need to go shower now. Reading has never made me sweat before.. until now. Wonderful to read and most enjoyable


  • jcat gold member
    February 29
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    Ahhhhhh.....Julie~ This was so lovely and I have to say that it surprised me from you!!! But I loved this entry and I thank you!!!!


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      February 29
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      Thank you

      For my HM
      Why were you surprised
      I really enjoyed this contest, made me use the gray matter
      and a different style too
      Hugs xxx

  • jcat gold member
    February 29

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    You did a gorgeous job on this.... Imagery was wonderful and very erotic. Well done and best of luck. Thank you for entering...

  • storiesuntold gold member
    February 25
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    Very well penned write here

    Within the heat of passion described to its max


  • imahealer
    February 23

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    Whoa! I already read one in this contest. You took this write into another realm. One thing I have never done. So tastefully, yet erotically written. My, Now I know this field is all yours. Not one I am very comfortable writing. 1000 points. Go Baby! Win this!

    Shana


  • I DONT EXIST
    February 22

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    ok...so am on the phone to you now and you said i could so.......dirty bitch hahahaha luvs ya hun xxx

  • I DONT EXIST
    February 22
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    well......what can i say....gobsmacked LOL


  • BeautifulFlame gold member
    February 21

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    I agree Brillent! You penned this very well in capturing the moment with simplcity.
    very nice
    ~Lisa~


  • Mallig gold member
    February 19

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    This is brilliant, truly. Gorgeously described. You have such a talent, you never cease to amaze! Wowee!


  • GentleGiant
    February 19
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    Oi

    Are you trying to get me going again, I'm working nights you know


  • DrunkenRam
    February 19
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    Ok Snake lady, where did this work of Art come from.
    Now I definitely need a shower.


  • poppa silver member
    February 19

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    Well done J....very tasteful and classy take on the prompt ......still maintains the heat while caressing the mind.....


  • RAWR-itsPurplepixie
    February 19
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    this was really HOT... I liked it

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 19

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    Wonderful writing. I thought it was beautiful and deep and very erotic too. Great imagery. Well done Julie. Brilliant writing.

    Love always
    Wayne x


  • maralisa gold member
    February 19

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    a very erotic write i like the shadowing in blue haze danced amonst the shhets good luck my friend with the contest speak to you soon x marina

  • Bob Fox
    February 19

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    Wow

    Hot , Hot , hot, Not for the kiddies lol. But what a visual I get. This old body aches even now...What can one say when they can see


  • Abe 1
    February 19

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    jeese dis is hot ! ahhhhhhhhhh
    Swaying hips raised

    Pumped to the fingered lust

    Mastered in masturbation

    Orgasmic filled its rush
    blow me
    gd luck 2 ya abe
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