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(I'll Say) Hello

I'll stand at the top of the tallest building in town
I'll take a look around
I'll shout it as loud as I can
I love you!!
I love you!!
I love you!!
And I'll stand before you and say nothing

I'll run down the roads telling every person that I meet
All over town, every street
I want the world to know
I love you!!
I love you!!
I love you!!
And I'll walk silently by your side

I'll write it in a poem and show it to the world
I love this girl
I'll say I love this girl
I love you!!
I love you!!
I love you!!
And I'll write you a note and ask how you are

I'll tell everyone I know I love this girl
I'll tell the whole damn world
But I can't tell you
I love you!!
I love you!!
I love you!!
And when I see you again I'll say hello

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 19, 2008
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    very nice piece, emotional and compelling. Thanks for the entry.