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Consoling You





as I
hold you
without words

your tears--
…become mine




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prompt inspired; contagous

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    I love it!!! It is possitively beautiful. I can see the picture so vividly. Your romantic pieces are my favorite. This one lets your love show in a unique way.
    Kelli

  • imahealer
    February 20, 2008

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    Congratulations on Gold! As you say as your motto......You are such a softie. If I tell you I'm crying, then will you come? Well, BU, I'm crying.

    Shana


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 20, 2008
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    Just priceless... x

  • Aisades
    February 19, 2008
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    This is beautiful Mal.


  • suseann
    February 19, 2008

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    In the voice of true compassion, this sings weaving notes in the silenced warmth of understanding.Lovely thoughts and words captured the spirit of the prompt well.


  • just rob gold member
    February 19, 2008
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    Good stuff!

    I wish I could do short like this...


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    to console someone without words spoken wonderful thoughts beheld in their minds,good few chosen words of compassion, thank you for sharing, good luck...
    Moons


  • Namita
    February 19, 2008

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    Sooo beautiful! A lovely take on the prompt! Brevity used cleverly over here... great job!

    - namita

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