30 hours 32 minutes,
That's how long we've been apart.
30 hours 32 minutes,
But still together in My heart.
30 hours 33 minutes,
It seems so very much more.
30 hours 33 minutes,
(But who's keeping the score)
560 days 1 hour 6 minutes and counting,
Since W/we met on that first date.
560 days 1 hour 6 minutes,
Since W/we were joined together by fate.
48,388,500 seconds, make that 506,
The time you've been in My heart.
48,388,511 seconds,
And it is just the start.
I could count every instant, every tick of the clock,
Until the end of time.
The world could end before I stopped,
And still you would be Mine.
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Beautiful!
My fiance and I celebrated our 1 year anniversary on sunday. the longest we have been apart since the day we met is 3 days
I know all about the feelings in this poem!
Well written
I'm so glad you are so happy! You deserve it! -
Clever poem
well written poem of love and appreciation.
enjoyable to read.
Buddy
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Wonderful write. This is how everyone should feel love. Missing them every second that they aren't around or aren't talking to them. I love the background you chose for this piece, too. The hourglass seems very fitting for symbolizing the passage of time that people aren't together. Keep that pen flowing.
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Thanks a lot for the comment.
Yes it does sometimes seem as if I can feel every bloody grain of sand as it slowly trickles down ...
By the way it is 48,462,900 seconds now!
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lol now thats showing how much you love someone... fantastic write full of a love that not many could match
cheers
Jen
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Thanks a lot!
Glad you enjoyed it
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~shaking head~
i am flabbergasted at the beauty and the oh so analytical (dare i use the word 'anal'?
) content of this write!!!
Your words have touched my heart (as they ALWAYS do) and this write of Yours has made me stand that little bit taller and my back is just a tiny bit straighter -thank You, thank You for everything and for allowing me to be in Your heart for so very long
i love You forever,
Forever Yours,
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I am glad that not only have the words touched you but that it made you feel better about yourself today (damn work huh!).
And what is wrong with being anal
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yeah - wish i was my OWN boss - that way i could spoil You rotten and YOU wouldn't have to work!!!!
lmao! There's absolutely nothing wrong with being anal ... ahem ... nothing at all ... ~cough~
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