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Sorrow Loomed Heavy

Missing image

As her heart died

with her lover

on the battlefield.

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10 words, picture prompt

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    February 20

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    god, what a picture!

    and what a mental image you created with your few, carefully chosen words...
    I'm beginning to feel a bit repetitive, but I'd really like to see this idea expanded upon.
    but it's always a joy to read anything from you, dear


  • Melissa Burns
    February 20

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    I enjoyed this poem, as well as the other 10 word prompt. Very good. You have a knack for getting your message across in so few words! Very nice indeed


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 19

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    awwww this is soooo wonderful, a lovely sad write, great job and good luck in the contest =)
    stephanie.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 19

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    Aww.. so sad!
    Beautiful as always, a whole life's story in 10 words!!


  • michichoeret
    February 19
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    wonderful


  • takemypainaway
    February 19

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    this is tremendously sad....

    you penned great heart into these 10 words!!!

    amazing

    Best of luck in the contest!!

    --Kat

  • Margaret Denham
    February 19

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    I can only imagine losing my lover and the empty hole that would be in the place where my heart once was.

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