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Tears For Josephine

Watching the rain on my window
Creating winter images of you
Like the tears when I'm sleeping
I cry them all the night through
But Josephine my love is eternal
Like each breath that I take
They all remind me of you

Josephine
These tears are all for you
And every breath I take
Sweet Josephine
What more can I do?
Even the strongest heart can break

There's storm on the horizon
And the clouds get in my eyes
You are the very reason
That I dedicate my life
For you Josephine

Josephine
These tears are all for you
And every breath I take
Sweet Josephine
What more can I do?
Even the strongest heart can break


If a life is lived without living
Without love we will surely fade away
In the coldest snows of winter
Even love can find a way
For these tears for Josephine
With each breath that I take
They all remind me of you
Oh! Josephine what am I to do?

I'll send all my love to you
If that's what it takes, I will
These tears for Josephine
I'll cry them all for you
If that's what it takes
I'll cry them all for you
I'll cry them all for you
Josephine...

Author notes

"Gotta Catch Them All"
AP name: dstreetpoet

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  • Luminescence
    March 17, 2008

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    Shancy was your judge for the contest… Because of the abundance of entries... we are having trouble getting two scores for each poem...I would just like to thank you anyway for entering and participating in our contest and good luck,
    ~luminescence


  • Shancy Fayre
    March 17, 2008

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    I like this. It's a good job. I really felt the remorse. Thank you so much for entering and participating in the contest. Good luck. Your score: Title:8 Diction:9 Syntax:9 Wowness factor:7 Total:33. Shancy.


  • Ms Raneika
    March 15, 2008
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    I like the love you expressed in your poem I thank you for entering my contest much love, Raneika


  • scream.n2.nite
    March 4, 2008

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    Sincere

    Very well-written!!! I really liked this piece, but I really reaaally wish you'd used more punctuation; it would have added to the grace of the poem. The lines hold such sincerity and they moved so well together... The imagery was also amazing. Brought back memories; goood stuff. Thank you very much for your entry!!!

    - - riah - -

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    Thank you for your lovely entry and dedication, good luck, Josie


  • bananasfoster42
    February 20, 2008

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    "If a life is lived without living
    Without love we will surely fade away"
    wow. this is a heartfelt write, thanks for the entry

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