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The Summons

Silk sheets slither.
    Head tossed back as,
            Wild abandon arises.


Primal, so intoxicating!
      Unconstrained, liberating
            Those dark whispers are...
       

                              beckoning me

Author notes

hmm... may tweak a bit... but here's this for now... LOL...

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    Well done in brevity...so wonderfully elegant and soft in flow...strong imagery and depth...
    Thank you for sharing!!!


  • Tarja
    February 19, 2008

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    The word choice in this was just so elegant. You've truly penned down a powerful and passionate piece here. Well done. Good luck.