Drifting hearts filigree dream
transcending temple cup transitions
patiently afloat in epiphany's cream
awaiting lips sipping renditions
stirring times yearning desires
soothing soulful inhibitions.
Author notes
Picture Prompt: 24 words exactly
In a list
A contest entry
- twenty four by le soir.
2400 points, ended March 13, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow love the pic,
and the poem is great the very first line
is my fave, keep up the great work
and lots of love
endless-lover -
HH you have brought out the imagery and set the atmosphere in your introduction....great flow keeping the theme throughout. All this in a cup of coffee how many times do we reflect and ponder solve the problems of the world in that cup....Great take on the prompt you called it and named it your own
good luck in the contest.
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This is fabulous hun.... perfect wording always within a restrictive word count.... perfect as always
Karen -
oh wow! this is lovely and dreamy... reminds of daydreaming like "clouds in my coffee.." well, instead of clouds you got love in your coffee! i especially loved this line "stirring times yearning desires."
many blessings and *stomps
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Yes! I love it. I have seen that picture may times before and I did come by this contest, but nothing came to mind. In my opinion you absolutely nailed it. Fantastic take on the prompt! Well done! Good luck!
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