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[ Let's set side aside our complications ]

Let's set side aside our complications
let's go all the way back to the start
Before situations and people prevented
Us from expressing what was in our heart

Would you have said I love you?
Or grabbed my hand as we walked?
Could the moments have been sweeter
If the air was clear as we talked?

Well, this is for those unanswered questions
For the future we'll never get to see
This is for living with a broken heart
And having to sleep on broken dreams


What about now, if things weren't like this
If these situations didn't leave us stranded.
Ever find yourself wondering what if?
If we'd taken the chance we weren't granted

Sometimes I feel broken rules are easier
Than broken hearts, I'd dare to say
That we would have fewer regrets and tears
Than we've been burdened with today


Well, this is for those unanswered questions
For the future we'll never get to see
This is for living with a broken heart
And having to sleep on broken dreams

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  • Nobody Important
    March 7, 2008

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    Nice.but the rhyme scheme is a bit weird, although i can't talk.sleeping on broken dreams is a desent bit of imagery.Really good.