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Awakening

oppressive twilight
fiery orbs surround
night creatures drawing near
ragged breathing
heart not beating
body filled with fear
cannot awake
no escaping
this waking nightmare

Author notes

Prompt: "...the night has grown strange...black beast with a million searching eyes...." Dean Koontz

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