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Artist Eye

Brush in hand
colors all set up
canvas ready

PAINT!

It comes from within
with each stroke
on the canvas

Starting out in your
head with an idea
but ends up different
surprising the artist

Stepping back to look
closely at the painting
that is done
you are in all

Knowing you could have done
better

An artist is its own worst
judge

There are always more
canvases to paint upon

For now you have released
enough energy within this
painting, relieving many feelings

 

 Its done....

A contest entry

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    Just as a poet, the painter is a very hard judge upon him/herself. Nicely done by stroking your page with vivid words. I want to thank you for entering my "A Painter's Brush!" contest.

    Ted E


  • scentedrose
    February 19, 2008
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    very nice

    I like this very much, that is why I am suggesting with a hope of you gaining a trophy even if it must be in my expense ( I hope not). I would edit the last two parts of the truthful poem. From "there are always more..." through to the end.

    I hope it was as much fun for you in this contest as was for me.