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The Best and Worst of Times

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In the blackened woods of midnight, stark within a beam of moonlight,

Hidden beneath a covering, by day a brightly glowing green,

The slinking bobcat’s rumbling growl and hooting of the great horned owl,

Remind the stranger to beware, beware of what is unforeseen.

"Now run and hide," the echoes call, "hide from all things unforeseen.

Run and hide my sweet Kathleen.

Twas yesterday at Lyndon Hall, she heard the eerie, haunting call,

And each of its chiseled stones lent its echo to the spectral scene.

Eagerly she sought the haven, past the image crassly graven,

Which her devil carefully carved, carved to haunt the sweet Kathleen,

For from it came the cursed words, the words that haunted sweet Kathleen,

Nowhere to hide my virgin queen.

Now she a stranger in this wood, who knew that in all likelihood,

The haunting dark surrounding her would make the foe, as yet unseen,

Sinister with vile heart beating, longing for that final meeting,

A last and final meeting with his quest, the lass Kathleen.

She flees through inky darkness, does this fated lass Kathleen,

Run and hide my virgin queen.

Then there upon her darkened way, came suddenly the light of day,

Revealing what was hidden there, but in the bright is quite obscene.

As she ran, her small feet flying, haunted by the thought of dying,

From the mist the soldiers take her, take our dear Kathleen.

Drag her off midst cutoff screaming, silent now the maid Kathleen,

Dead at last by guillotine.

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Was working on this when I came across this contest. Hope the fact that it has four stanzas isn't a problem.

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  • lindaburns gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    The occasional Raven crossed my mind as I read this poem. I enjoyed it even though it had a sad ending. “As she ran, her small feet flying, haunted by the thought of dying, From the mist the soldiers take her, take our dear Kathleen.” Poor, sweet, (rebel?) lass.


  • redsundown
    February 21, 2008

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    love it

    your words ring true
    and left me eager
    and in my mind you know
    i could see her
    running fast death drawing nearer
    nearer 2 this kathleen of yors

  • James Ether
    February 20, 2008
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    Very well done

    It was the final stanza that took me


  • beautiful-sadness
    February 20, 2008
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    4 stanzas is certainly no problem. this is wonderful!


  • suseann
    February 19, 2008

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    I shan't say I'm astonded by this masterful piece you have graced us with in enjoyed reading,by venturing your name. Because I see it's an anonymous comp after all. It would be apparent though to those of us whom enjoy reading your works,this is yours. Most asuridly a master's piece in composition. Bravo Poet!


  • SpiritMother
    February 19, 2008

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    Exceptional write!

    Another great write from you as always..good luck in the contest sweetie!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    the poet that you are, the mind delves deep into the picture and comes up with this wonderful but sad piece, nicely put together, good luck in this contest...Moons


  • catz Moderators member
    February 18, 2008

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    Ahhh, very Poeish. This fine poem kept me engrossed in it's eerieness and anticipation of what might come.

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • Veronica Leigh
    February 18, 2008

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    wow this is amazing! I don't know HOW you do it! Really beautiful and very different too. I love this one. It's def. a favorite!

    P.S. Love the background too!

    and much love!

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