To Love is to breathe…
And feels you up tell you seethe..
To smell fresh rain
And when succumbed you feel insane
Held by it so big it pains
Shunt and shaking
My strength is breaking
And at last a smile
Time stops and for awhile
Drinking deeply the aroma of her hair
Enthralled and falling.. too much to bare
An immense depth in those eyes
And I fear its end when this sweet embrace dies
Frailty is only the beginning
The ocean is just becoming
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awww to love
Comments
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Brilliant job. Love is a very complex emotion that controls you if you let it. Great job.
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Thank you for entering
Drinking deeply the aroma of her hair
Enthralled and falling.. too much to bare
Beautiful lines
This is simple and sweet. Good job! -
wow
quite an amazing peice. i love the imagery u put in here. its actually quit amazing. great write. =D
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