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Finally done?

Cut the chains
Free the minds
Set loose the spirit
That dwells in each.

Break down the barriers
Tear through the walls
Giving hope
When all is lost.

A guided light
In the darkest corner
Of the greatest nation's
Worst kept secret.



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  • Mountainwhispers
    February 24, 2008

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    THis is really well written I enjoyed reading this piece! A guided light
    In the darkest corner
    Liked that!!!
    ~Ocean~