tell them to go away
how do you know my name
who are you
please leave
away
get out of my bed
do i know you?
why cant i touch you
are you realy there
put that knife away
i am scared
please dont kill me
i would rather do it my self
i beg you stop looking at me
and holding it
backing me into the corner
a razzor
my savior
mabye if i cut it will go away
but no i am trying to stop
i want it to go away!
so i cut
no
he is still here
whats that sound?
mom, did you scream
what do you mean you where asleep
i heard it
you screamed
no Ali i didnt scream, you hearing things
i know you screamed
there is a man in my room
you dont see him? he is right there walking towards you
no sir take me not my mom
ali why do you scream
he is killing me i can feel it
no thats me killing me
GO AWAY!!!!
Author notes
Read it fast like you where running in a horor movie, thats how i wrote it, as i thought it
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this is creepy... i like that it sounds so rushed and panicked. very unique.
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thanx
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hmmm interesting... wow amazing how you put it together!
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thnx i was hvin a scary moment wen i wrote tht
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Good job. This is a nice poem, and sounds alot like things we talked about. Its really cool and exciting. You captured what it's really like.
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yeah i guess it does lol, yeah i couldv sworn i heard my mom scear last night tho it was soooo real sounding !!!
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i hate when this happens to people. but you did an amazing job of putting it down on paper (/screen) and i can feel that running feeling you said youre trying to convey.
great write... (you could probably work on the spelling, but i guess youre covered cause you put a disclaimer in your profile page)
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hahah yeah thts not my strong point... lol
thnx 4 taking the time to read it
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wow very good very good sweetie!!!
i loved it i mean wow amazing
the poem had me going and out of my seat type thing
keep it up doll, and remember you have control of everything i love you lots..
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thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really appricate you reading what i write
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