Slam your fists
into this brick wall
And you just pretend
like you're so helpless
You're looking at me
expecting something
I turn my face away
[I've died for you enough]
It's not gonna happen again
I never wanted to walk away
you left me no choice
What did you want me to say;
"oh honey; it's okay"?
I gave you everything
and you threw it away
You never even let us have a beginning
[before you were heading for the end]
I put all my faith in you
I'm not as blind as
you make me out to be
I can see how easily you give up
and run away from everything
Why can't you fight
like the man you're supposed to be?
Find you're own way out
[you can't run away]
You get what you deserve
Author notes
Paramore ~ "For A Pessimist, I'm Pretty Optimistic"
DeathDolly
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A contest entry
- music = life ♥ by CatastrophicSmile.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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wow.. this is reallygood.. i really liekd reading this. really original.
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wow this is amazing i love it. there is nothing i can say that is bad about this. beautiful write ♥
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I loved this poem. It has a rawness to it that makes you think. Good luck in the contest!!





