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[ For A Pessimist ] { I'm Pretty Optimistic ♥ }

Slam your fists
  into this brick wall
And you just pretend
  like you're so helpless
You're looking at me
  expecting something
I turn my face away
  [I've died for you enough]
It's not gonna happen again

I never wanted to walk away
  you left me no choice
What did you want me to say;
  "oh honey; it's okay"?
I gave you everything
  and you threw it away
You never even let us have a beginning
  [before you were heading for the end]
I put all my faith in you

I'm not as blind as
  you make me out to be
I can see how easily you give up
  and run away from everything
Why can't you fight
  like the man you're supposed to be?
Find you're own way out
  [you can't run away]
You get what you deserve

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Paramore ~ "For A Pessimist, I'm Pretty Optimistic"

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  • Lady Michaella
    February 9
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    wow.. this is reallygood.. i really liekd reading this. really original.
    xx

  • me is me
    November 30, 2008
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    like it


  • CatastrophicSmile
    February 25, 2008

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    wow this is amazing i love it. there is nothing i can say that is bad about this. beautiful write ♥

    x finalist x


  • BehindTheShadow
    February 18, 2008
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    I loved this poem. It has a rawness to it that makes you think. Good luck in the contest!!