in this room a little girl cries.
she is afraid of what he might do to her.
she holds her teddy bear close to her and tries not to think about it.
he comes in the room and says hey my little girl.
the little girl says in fear daddy do we have too.
he says shhh we cant wake up mommy.
he starts to kiss her and other things to her.
she tries to get away but he holds her down.
she screams but he puts sumthing in her mouth and than put duck tape over it
she starts to kick and he cant control her.
he ties her to the bed to she cant move.
her legs tied to the side of the bed so she cant close them.
her arms r tied to the bed post.
she starts to cry.
he knows this hurts her but he cant stop.
she cries these tears every night.
he does this so her mother cant hear.
so he gets what he wants.
this little girl now is gone she went to heaven.
to be an angel she wanted to be.
her father didnt care how much he hurt her until he went to far.
she kicked and screamed and untied herself.
he didnt lik that so he took that teddy bear she held each night to try and forget bout him.
he sufficated her so her fightful limbs into fightless limbs.
so now as this precious little girl now becomes our precious little angel.
we never will forget what happened to her that day.
as it turns into the day of her funeral we bury that same teddy bear with her so it will go with her to heaven.
and now our precious baby girl has gone to heaven we shall let her live the life she never could have here on earth.
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Absolutely heart shattering this rips past the eyes and straight into the mind and heart; you have a few small spelling errors but nothing that takes away the depth of this
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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this poem has such powerful emotions of sadness i can relate to many of your words the past does not eqaul the future
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When I first read this peice, I thought of a young child expressing the pain..(which in my spiritual belief, is what happened.)Then I went to your page and saw you were a young woman..yet you still hold that image of the inner child. You wrote it in freestyle and I can find a few mistakes but for the write itself, I feel you did a very good job in expressing the Angel's feelings. Niaish
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wow, that is an amazingly powerful write, it brought reduced me to tears as it brought back so many memories, it could almost be written about me, except that the angels didn´t take me away from that hell.
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I have warned you once and you did not do what i asked. Entering what i wanted in your author notes, im sorry but i must remove you because rules are rules.
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Please enter what I asked for in your author notes, I will not read this until then
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how do i? it's a prewrite..idk how to
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a truly heartbreaking poem.
thanks for entering it!
Cheers,
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WELL EXPRESSED
THE STORY YOU TELL IS TRULY A HEARTBREAKER AND TOO OFTEN A HARSH REALITY THAT NO ONE SHOULD BE FORCED TO LIVE THRU. THANK YOU FOR PRESENTING YOUR HEART AND ALWAYS SPEAK OUT IN DEFENSE FOR THE VICTIM. YOU ARE POET LET ME READ. PLEASE PLACE YOUR USERNAME IN RESPONE TO MY COMMENT ALONG WITH YOUR PLACEMENT PREFERENCE IN AP FAMILY.
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